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The Merchant of Venice Beach (A Venice Beach Romance Book 1) Kindle Edition
68,000 Words
- LanguageEnglish
- PublishereOriginals
- Publication dateAugust 1, 2013
- File size1042 KB
Product details
- ASIN : B00BTG44O2
- Publisher : eOriginals (August 1, 2013)
- Publication date : August 1, 2013
- Language : English
- File size : 1042 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 230 pages
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Kudos to Ms. Bonaduce for busting out of the gate with her first novel. I can't wait to see what she has in store for us next.
Part 1:
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The book’s heroine is Suzanna Wolf, a 32 year-old woman from the aforementioned Venice Beach, California. Suzanna and her two best friends and roommates, Eric Cooper and Fernando Cruz, own The Rollicking Bun, a combination tea/pastry shop and bookstore. One day, while coming out of a supermarket, Suzanna is hit by a car. (She is not injured). Later, Suzanna decides to take dancing lessons from the man who hit her, a dance instructor named Rio whom she is hot for.
Part 2: Napa Valley.
In this segment, we drop back to focus on Suzanna's childhood/teenage years in Northern California. Suzanna's family consisted of: her parents, mother Virginia and father Martin, both college professors, and her older sister, Erinn, a former Broadway playwright. (Martin was killed in an auto accident many years ago). We also learn about Suzanna’s love/hate relationship with her bestie, Carla Caridi, an architect, vinter, and subject of some anger by Suzanna. This portion of the book also reveals how Suzanna, Eric and Fernando met, became friends, and later, decided to travel to Southern California to become business partners and roommates.
Part 3: Downtown.
The scene shifts back to current time. The Rollicking Bun is undergoing a renovation. Suzanna is still taking dance classes and mooning after Rio, whom she nearly has sex with. She also has her 33rd birthday, which is nowhere near a happy occasion.
Part 4: Uptown.
Change is on the horizon. Fernando is leaving to join a carpentry business, Carla is returning to the Napa Valley, and Suzanna and Eric realize they love each other. (In that same moment, an earthquake hits. Eric suffers a broken leg, but he and Suzanna become engaged). The book ends with Suzanna and Eric getting married and having their Happily Ever After.
Upside: “The Merchant of Venice Beach” is a fairly well-written book for a first-time author.
Downside: Much of what one feels about the book will be dependent on how one feels about Suzanna. My feelings toward her are mixed.
On the one hand, Suzanna is a nice enough person, and I can certainly relate to her frequent panic attacks-something I deal with as well. I can also relate to pursuing people who don’t feel the same way about me.
On the other hand, I found Suzanna to be quite neurotic, and at times a bit of a sad, pathetic figure. This is especially true when she spends most of the book pursuing Rio, a man who shows no romantic interest in her, but Suzanna, being who she is, cannot or will not see this. Ms. Bonaduce doesn’t do a great job of developing or making me truly care about her characters; “The Merchant of Venice Beach” is very much a “Readers Are Supposed to Care” because these are the characters book.
Sex: Some heavy petting and one near-sexual encounter involving Suzanna and Rio. The scene never goes further than that.
Violence: While at their senior prom, Carla’s date starts groping her; Eric punches the creep and that ends the incident.
Bottom Line: As I’ve said many times about first-in-a-series books, the purpose of the book is to make readers excited for the work that follows. Based on my views toward “The Merchant of Venice Beach”, I can’t say I’m excited to read more of Ms. Bonaduce’s work (although I own most, if not all, of her books).
I think women of all ages can relate to Suzanna's character and her search for human connection, and how we all often look for it in the wrong places.
This is not a typical romance novel in the best of ways - It has both heart and humor and values friendship as much as attraction. Yet the story is driven by the main character's yearning for erotic connection and her taking control of her own life to make it happen.
I discovered the author has a new book out called "A Comedy of Errin" and I look forward to reading more from Celia Bonaduce!