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The Bone Factory (Murder! Mystery! Mayhem! Book 5) Kindle Edition
When she stumbles on a bunch of skeletons found in different warehouses, all wearing mysterious rings, Max finds herself in a dangerous and deadly situation that leads back to her...
(cover by Adrian Baldwin)
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateNovember 27, 2020
- File size798 KB
Product details
- ASIN : B08MY3TV65
- Publisher : Demain Publishing; 1st edition (November 27, 2020)
- Publication date : November 27, 2020
- Language : English
- File size : 798 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 66 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #2,539,529 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #12,573 in Occult Horror
- #23,079 in Occult Fiction
- #26,015 in Two-Hour Literature & Fiction Short Reads
- Customer Reviews:
About the author
I live in Sydney, Australia with my awesome husband.
Writing is something I've been doing since my teens, and never get tired of it. I enjoy writing in a variety of genres, but all of my stories are shadowed by darkness because I can't keep the horror out of every tale.
When I'm not writing, I like to watch movies, my favourite TV shows, enjoy going for long walks, and love reading. I'm a HUGE reader. I love books--both writing and reading them! I'm a total bibliophile.
www.yolandasfetsos.com
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Miss Patella (Max) is an investigator in the city of Lorn. She’s one of the few who will stand up for women, and unlike the corrupt police force, she doesn’t take bribes. She gets a nominal amount of payment for helping the police out on cases they don’t want to be bothered with themselves. Detective Morado, her contact in the police department, has some sort of strange interest in her. This time, she’s been called in to investigate the presence of a skeleton–a person was killed and essentially melted in a vat of super-hot plastic in a factory. The skeleton is wearing a strange ring, which Max pockets–something tells her she doesn’t want to turn it over to the police. More skeletons are found under similar circumstances, and Max feels like she’s being watched.
Max has a strange ability: when she touches her bare right hand to the skeletons, she can “hear” their voices. And these skeletons? They don’t want “him” to take them. The world this takes place in is fascinating. It’s seedy (most of the female characters were formerly strippers at a particular club), and it’s very male-centered. Women have to fight hard to not be trampled upon. The police are also extremely corrupt–they take bribes all the time. The large number of factories have turned the rain distinctly acidic. There are witches and necromancers afoot. It’s a bit dystopian in nature.
Max has some sort of past “incident” that still affects her, and that gets referenced obliquely from time to time. Detective Morado seems more antagonistic toward her than anything, even though he’s the one who called her in. When we eventually do find out what past incident affects Max so strongly, it’s lacking a serious amount of context. It’s an info dump about something that happened entirely outside the scope of the book. It needs more book length to work it into the story better, to make it not come out of left field.
There were also a number of things that didn’t add up to me with this story. It’s hard to say much about this without including spoilers, but I’ll just say I kept finding myself saying, “but why didn’t they…” or “why did they…”. There just seem to be little plot holes in the details of the crimes.
I enjoyed this book–it’s extremely creative–and I will definitely read more by Yolanda Sfetsos, but this story needed to be half again as long.
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And what would be right at home in place like this? That’s right, murder. When a body is found in a doll factory (not a bone one, yet) the cops bring in their expert of the weird. Max Patella is a lady with a troubled past, but by helping the police in these strange cases she hopes to give herself some semblance of normality in this anything-but-normal city.
I say body, she’s actually called in to investigate a skeleton. All flesh and tissue is gone. What’s more creepy is that when Max touches the skull, she hears the voice of the victim pleading with her. And then there’s the strange ring in the bony hand.
More skeletons appear (and more rings) and before she knows it Max is deep into this case. What begins as a murder investigation suddenly spirals into a dark tale of witches, magic, and occult rituals involving some right nasty baddies.
There is some great imagery here, with some genuinely spooky moments. Who can Max trust, who is in on these murders and the big conspiracy?
As with all shorty stories, I can’t say much more here. But our Yolanda has created another corker of a story here. Perhaps it could have been a bit longer, but most things are explained and I’m kind of being a bit nit-picky with that complaint, so I’l stop.
This is another great release from Demain, and Yolanda Sfetsos continues to kick some bony butt!!
Go and check it out!!!!